I love you too?

Quick, confused thoughts on being the person who is loved, but not sure if they love in return.

You do

but you don't.

You want to.

You should.

You do.

Do you?

I do, but I don't.

Author's Note

Not exactly a poem, just pure stream of consciousness, putting thoughts on "paper" with no filter.

Reviews

[Cambion]

A woman of your beauty will spend a lifetime inspiring poetry as well as infatuation. You certainly can't be held responsible for mitigating the heartbreak, but perhaps you will hold some sympathy in your heart for those whose eyes have led their hearts to you.

[Preliving]

Wow, thank you so much! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

[JC]

definitely exudes the confusion of emotion, ambiguous but also straight to the point...I totally see stream of consciousness as some of the best writing out there. Enjoyed this.

[Matching Socks]

Yup, I know the feeling... It's right up there with:

- should I? / shouldn't I?
- do it / don't do it
- jump / don't jump

All of the above, related to love...

:-)

[A.J.]

I would call it a poem, and an excellent, relate-able one at that. very nice.

[Don't just B, but B ama..]

Raw emotions, shared in a complicated, yet simple way. Did that even make sense? Hmm, nice work, and just a tip, you're so young don't worry about the stupid boys that treat you wrong now keep writing, and one day you will find the boy who is absolutely stupid about you. Nice work. Thank you.

[ANTO]

its quite hard thing to do - to put down thoughts as they occur since they occur in the blink of an eye much faster than we can remember or write or even dictaphone them. This captures that blur and the resultant self dialogue quite well Ciara
Good one
ps
reminded me of a Suzanne Vega song called 'Language' - one of the lyrics goes
"Words are too solid
they dont move fast enough
to catch the blur of the brain
and they're ......gone"

[anant mody]

aewesomeeee realllyyyy felttt nic nic to readdd
it nic peice of work:-):-):-)