Timmy's lost shoe

Timmy's lost shoe

A Poem by h cingisiz
"

A boy loses his new shoe.

"

 

 

Timmy had lost his shoe

"Mummy mummy" he cried

"I’ve lost my new shoe"

And tears welled in his eyes

 

"Close your eyes" she said

"Think where were you

Think of that place

And you will find your shoe"

 

So he closed his eyes tight

And screwed up his face

And thought very very hard

Where was that last place

 

He ran out of the house

Into the back yard

And stood quite still

Thinking very hard

 

The swings the swings

He thought it could be there

But all that he found

Was his old teddy bear

 

He picked up his toy

And turned around and around

Thinking thinking thinking

Where could it be found

 

"Timmy Timmy yoo-hoo"

his mummy cried

"I’ve found your lost shoe"

And he ran inside

 

 

© 2012 h cingisiz


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No wonder youngsters think their mothers are all-seeing. Very well-written, my friend.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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so, where did the mother found timmy's shoe? :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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h cingisiz

8 Years Ago

Good point, left it a bit hanging haven't I? Will think on an extra verse or two, thanks for the rev.. read more
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8 Years Ago

no prob :)

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Added on December 5, 2012
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Tags: shoe, timmy, lost, found, poem, children, fun

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h cingisiz
h cingisiz

Turkey



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A British ex-pat mother living in SE Turkey with my family, working from home mainly as a graphic and website designer, but I love all things creative including writing but have only recently begun my.. more..

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