Digging Up Worms.

Digging Up Worms.

A Poem by C.
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Wanna develop this one into something a little harder hitting.

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There's a picture of James Dean on the television set
And a grimace wrestles onto my face
I hate that guy

Mmm, I hardly see grass at all anymore
I remember lots of juicy grass when I was a kid
Where did all the grass go?

The whiskey looks like amber
God, if only I could get the grass back
Another sip

© 2010 C.


Author's Note

C.
Let me know what you think. Wrote it relatively quick. Not sure if I like it yet. Maybe could use a little more work?

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I like it the way it is. It captures moving thoughts, fleeting images. This is a nice short poem that paints a picture and takes the reader close to the poet's mind.

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C.
C.

London, England, United Kingdom



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I'm a Philosophy major, Creative Writing minor. I like Philip K. Dick, Frank Herbert, Isaac Asimov. Partial to poetry. My poems are mostly short. Recurring themes: detachment, apathy, loss, melancholy.. more..

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