Go Ahead

Go Ahead

A Poem by ClaireBear

My friend is well...just read it.

You ignore us?
Go ahead.
You test us?
Go ahead.
You want to believe
you're right?
Go ahead.
I am sick of
Your Criticisms,
Your Comments,
Your Tricks.
And if you want to
Put our friendship
On the line...
Well go ahead.
You need to learn to
Appreciate what you have,
To give people the
They deserve.
If you are too
Go ahead.
But next time
Don't expect much help
From me.
If you want to annoy us.
Well go ahead.
But next time you just might find
That I am not willing
Go Ahead

© 2011 ClaireBear

Author's Note

If you're gonna be a friend, please be a good one.

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I've doubted some of my friends sometimes, and I get scared our friendships on the line. Sometimes I feel it's silly to fight over the most silliest of stuff, i mean if you're friends in the first place, why fight? it's stupid.

Posted 11 Years Ago

@ Gleek4ever21 oh I'M being mean? i never complained to you about how you should just get over Jared 'cause yeah we know he was mean to you but he wasn't THAT mean i never said that to your face i never told you when you were hurting my feelings and not paying attention to how hurtful your words came out even if they weren't meant to i never FREAKED OUT at you in my room & then didn't even give you time to calm down so you cud explain yourself.

Posted 11 Years Ago

StrawberryHart36 is being mean! This poem expresses both of our feelings towards her. Good job! Its awesome!

Posted 11 Years Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I've been trying to say the EXACT SAME THING to you guys, only a little more than that.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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4 Reviews
Added on July 10, 2011
Last Updated on July 10, 2011
Tags: go ahead, clairebear6, poem



Portland, OR

Hey my name's Claire and I'm 13. I love music, I love writing, I love reading, and I love eating. Music inspires me to keep moving on. I like bands and singers like Avril Lavigne, Justin Bieber, Angel.. more..