How We Dance

How We Dance

A Poem by clairvoyantmars

Alone in my distant longing
The pitiful air I'm donning
I close my eyes and wonder
In loneliness I ponder
How it feels to dance with you

Maybe one night at evening
Love, this I'm just foreseeing,
We'll walk towards the dance floor
The world around is no more
What does it feel to dance with you?

Will you put your arms around my waist
And cradle me in safe embrace?
Will we gaze upon each others eyes
And speak in only soft replies?
Oh, I want to dance with you.

Will we be so close together
Like the last we saw each other?
And between the soft sweet kisses,
Steady breaths and stolen glances
When will I first dance with you?

At gentle pace you'll guide me
And leave the past behind me
The world is just two people
Magical, unbelievable
Is this how it feels to dance with you?

And to grasp the music's last note
I'll kiss you and tighten my hold
You'll ask: "Anything the matter?"
And in your ear I will whisper:
"I know how it feels to dance with you."

© 2011 clairvoyantmars


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Sweet and poised for the reader, well done good read

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful tender longing and love .. It has nice imagery so sweet and lovely .
I really like your last line .. dream finally came true.

Chloe

Posted 12 Years Ago


A very sweet poem, reminding me of what it was like to be young and have a secret crush on someone. You captured the moment very well with an extremely strong finish.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This one really put a picture in my head. I loved it. I felt the love in the poem and it made me smile. You're great. Love to see more!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow... this is beauty in the form of a love poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very lovely piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The intimate feeling of dancing with that someone special, beautiful poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This took me back to my dancing days. This would make a beautiful song. Either country or maybe John Mayer. I love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is lovely I thought of our prom dances... Ohhh the things you do to me, CLAIRVOYANTMARS! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was cute. It reminded me of a middle school dance where everyone is afraid to dance and just sits there imagining how it feels to be on the dance floor with their secret crush. Nice write. you captured the moment very well

Posted 12 Years Ago



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clairvoyantmars
clairvoyantmars

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I've been seriously starting to write my own novels since 2008. So far, I've finished three novels and have a lot of unfinished ones piled up. I also write short stories and poems and the occasional s.. more..

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