What Difference?

What Difference?

A Poem by clairvoyantmars

They said it wouldn’t work out

Don’t find out way too late

They said we’re just too different

What difference does it make?

 

We’d wake up in the morning

In our house by the sea

You gulping down your coffee

Me sipping at my tea

 

I loved the noontime quiet

You loved the big rock bands

But when I want a quiet walk

We’d go out holding hands

 

You see they had it all wrong

If only they could see

Our precious times together

What difference could there be?

© 2011 clairvoyantmars


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Nice work

Posted 8 Years Ago


So lovely, shows that two people can fall in love no matter what differences they have. the flow is excellent and i enjoyed it very much

Posted 8 Years Ago


aww sweet, i liked the flow, and great rhyming... i enjoyed this, really nice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


That is really nice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Absolutly perfect... Yoe see they had it all wrong, If only they could see, Our precious times together, What difference could there be? This has got to be one of your best that I have read yet. I love the emotions, the love they share, the imagery. The flow is perfect... OUTSTANDING!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


people can be different and like different things and still live in love

Posted 8 Years Ago


short and you packed it with loads if feelings!
love this!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This well written piece is bright, sunny and an enjoyable read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is so sweet :')

Posted 8 Years Ago


i think its a cute poem but something is missing... like it took me while to fully understand what you were trying to get through.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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clairvoyantmars
clairvoyantmars

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I've been seriously starting to write my own novels since 2008. So far, I've finished three novels and have a lot of unfinished ones piled up. I also write short stories and poems and the occasional s.. more..

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