What Difference?

What Difference?

A Poem by clairvoyantmars

They said it wouldn’t work out

Don’t find out way too late

They said we’re just too different

What difference does it make?


We’d wake up in the morning

In our house by the sea

You gulping down your coffee

Me sipping at my tea


I loved the noontime quiet

You loved the big rock bands

But when I want a quiet walk

We’d go out holding hands


You see they had it all wrong

If only they could see

Our precious times together

What difference could there be?

© 2011 clairvoyantmars

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Nice work

Posted 9 Years Ago

So lovely, shows that two people can fall in love no matter what differences they have. the flow is excellent and i enjoyed it very much

Posted 10 Years Ago

aww sweet, i liked the flow, and great rhyming... i enjoyed this, really nice.

Posted 10 Years Ago

That is really nice.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Absolutly perfect... Yoe see they had it all wrong, If only they could see, Our precious times together, What difference could there be? This has got to be one of your best that I have read yet. I love the emotions, the love they share, the imagery. The flow is perfect... OUTSTANDING!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago

people can be different and like different things and still live in love

Posted 10 Years Ago

short and you packed it with loads if feelings!
love this!

Posted 10 Years Ago

This well written piece is bright, sunny and an enjoyable read.

Posted 10 Years Ago

This is so sweet :')

Posted 10 Years Ago

i think its a cute poem but something is missing... like it took me while to fully understand what you were trying to get through.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on May 24, 2011
Last Updated on May 24, 2011




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