Under the Sheets

Under the Sheets

A Poem by clairvoyantmars

Under the sheets

Bare skin, vulnerability

Caressed in satin

Private solitude


Halfway there

Blurred mirage

Longing for dreams

High off of love


Gentle caress

A touch barely there

Soft hidden kisses

Sweet quiet sighs


Blush creeping out

Heart beating fast

Eyes closed in darkness

Delicately parted lips


Shared in the moment

Distance is gone

Warmth for the night

Under the sheets

© 2011 clairvoyantmars

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Sweet, lovely moments of intimacy. You captured this with your choice of words!

Posted 7 Years Ago

You wound me up clicked run and
turned me loose. I kept looking for
loose sheets and then I found yours.
Bravo ! I liked this poem so much that
I just crawled in and warmed myself in
the glow of your talented mind.
---- John

Posted 7 Years Ago

The words in the first stanza seem unfocused and slightly jumbled to me. However this piece is amazing. Wonderful description and flow. Great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago

A nice poem of romance. We need to know the nights of love and a warm body near under the sheets. I like the description and the flow of the excellent poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Sensual, romantic and cute. What a lovely piece!

Posted 8 Years Ago

I like this poem. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago

This is very sweet and romantic. I love your choice of words in this one. Well done..xx

Posted 8 Years Ago

Very sensual and warm. Nicely written!

Posted 8 Years Ago

This is really quite perfect. The words here are so perfect for the work... great write!

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on August 8, 2011
Last Updated on August 8, 2011




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