Under the Sheets

Under the Sheets

A Poem by clairvoyantmars

Under the sheets

Bare skin, vulnerability

Caressed in satin

Private solitude

 

Halfway there

Blurred mirage

Longing for dreams

High off of love

 

Gentle caress

A touch barely there

Soft hidden kisses

Sweet quiet sighs

 

Blush creeping out

Heart beating fast

Eyes closed in darkness

Delicately parted lips

 

Shared in the moment

Distance is gone

Warmth for the night

Under the sheets

© 2011 clairvoyantmars


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Amazing work. I like how you used a lot of words and great phrases to make this sound so real. This really amaze me so keep up the good work. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


warmth for the night under the sheets. This is a great sensual poem that is very vague and leave the details to the imagination which makes a very sensual piece done tastefully

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sensual depiction here. Reminiscent of a "Vargas" illustration.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very nice and passionate without being pornographic. The tone is set very well!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mmmm! Very expressive. I really like this poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wonderfully passionate..and sweet. I love it..xx

Posted 7 Years Ago


This poem appeals to all of the senses.
Very sweet and romantic.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Unbelievable. All the stanzas hold mystery and beauty as it forms the image being represented. Like PoppySilver, underneath those sheets is where happiness awaits.

"Shared in the moment

Distance is gone

Warmth for the night

Under the sheets"

The last stanza caught with me and it made me smile. Brilliant!

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is lovely..powerful and sensual...all else can dissolve...when beneath the sheets such devotion cradles happiness :) Beautiful poem! xx

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lovely and oh so sensuous!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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clairvoyantmars
clairvoyantmars

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I've been seriously starting to write my own novels since 2008. So far, I've finished three novels and have a lot of unfinished ones piled up. I also write short stories and poems and the occasional s.. more..

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