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SUNSHINE BRINGS A SMILE

SUNSHINE BRINGS A SMILE

A Poem by Susie Q

A cloudy, dreary day can make us sad

It makes us think rain may be on the way.

The wind might blow up a big storm

With thunder and lightning in the sky.

Now and then the sun will peek through

Just to say, " Hey, I'm still up here"

One little ray can make you SMILE.

After the storm usually comes the sun

To brighten our world once more.

 

© 2010 Susie Q


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I guess that is why the guy who made that smiley face with "have a nice day" is, now, a multi-multi-multi-millionare. I think the happy influence of sunshine on our personality, for the day, must date back to the cavemen. Sometimes, we can find our own sunshine, too, during the storms of our lives. You have been my sunshine, quite a few times, Mom. All it takes is one ray of sunshine, one ray of happiness and hope, to make us forget about the gloom. This is a short, sweet nicely written tribute to our friend, Mr. Sunshine; we all love him so!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina Kline

9 Years Ago

This is very moving, indeed. She is so right.
Susie Q

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Tina, for checking out Christina's review. I thought you might like It.
Tina Kline

9 Years Ago

You are very welcome.



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Short and sweet and to the point! Often a smile IS the sunshine which can chase away the storm and lift someone's spirit. Well penned, my friend.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I guess that is why the guy who made that smiley face with "have a nice day" is, now, a multi-multi-multi-millionare. I think the happy influence of sunshine on our personality, for the day, must date back to the cavemen. Sometimes, we can find our own sunshine, too, during the storms of our lives. You have been my sunshine, quite a few times, Mom. All it takes is one ray of sunshine, one ray of happiness and hope, to make us forget about the gloom. This is a short, sweet nicely written tribute to our friend, Mr. Sunshine; we all love him so!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina Kline

9 Years Ago

This is very moving, indeed. She is so right.
Susie Q

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Tina, for checking out Christina's review. I thought you might like It.
Tina Kline

9 Years Ago

You are very welcome.

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Susie Q
Susie Q

Columbus, OH



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