Satisfaction

about loving someone more than they love you.

Trying to feel full

I poured my heart out for you,

Grasping for what I thought was love,

I. always. fall. short.

Am I the only one looking for love?

Why do I always leave emptier than I was?

Author's Note

I hope the theme is consistent and my wording isn't too bland! any/all criticism is greatly appreciated!!!

Reviews

[Nigel Newman]

Hi Cleo. You sent a friend request so I've started looking at your writing. I quite like this because
- It says what it wants to then finishes. Its shortness gives it impact because there is a lot packed into each line.
- 4th line is very clever. Great. way. to. emphasise.
- A high standard of grammar/spelling, which matters to me a lot

Nice work
Nigel

[RannunculusBlooms]

THANK YOU!! your words mean alot to me!

[Najam Us Saher]

Very thoughtful. When we seek out to find love we get hurt more than before.

[Karmee]

Just the way that love is. well expressed

[RannunculusBlooms]

ikr ugh but thank you nonetheless!!