Fresh Cuts

Fresh Cuts

A Poem by Meghan

Your eyes of blue push me down and leave me falling
It scares my heart
You told me lies, I knew, but still believed them
That scares my heart

I wonder if there is anyone here forever
I always seem to get left behind
I see the truth and it's still a fight to walk away from you
Your smile still melts my heart

I hoped that maybe you were real
This was no dream that I was living
I thought that maybe you were real
I always get left behind
I think it's time that I run.

© 2013 Meghan


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its sweet, yet grief stricken

"You told me lies, I knew, but still believed them "
lies are usually meant to hurt, if you believe them then
they have done what they wanted to do.
"I always get left behind
I think it's time that I run."
lol i love this line the best,
you can always take your time :)



Posted 10 Years Ago


The broken hearted blues. Good Poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very nice. I like the use of repetition here - it highlights the dynamic between the second and third stanzas. And it would be interesting to know what you think you should "run" to...follow up poem? Eh? Eh?

Overall, good work.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Meghan
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