End of Story

End of Story

A Poem by Meghan

For the man I loved one thousand times
In the comfort of familiar pines
How you kept me running back into your arms, darling!
There you sat upon a fractured throne
Never said the words I should've known

From the channel most sincere
How quick it broke, how quick it healed
I'd a missed you for nothing but to blame me, darling!
When you make a point to say goodbye
Your sloppy kisses lined with lullabies
Make it difficult to stay alive

For the man, comes an empty silence
Tethered to a hopeless kindness
Well, you strike me but I like it don't you stop now, darling!
Never feel an ounce of shame or pain
For the honeysuckle need the rain
Curse your God and shout your lover's name





© 2012 Meghan


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Kes
I can't entirely tell if you intended this to come across a little twisted, but that's how I see it. Don't get me wrong - I LOVE twisted. :)
"fractured throne" is so clever. It makes me think of splintered bones. I like the idea of a throne made out of splintered bones. "sloppy kisses lined with lullabies" is particularly outstanding too. One moment it's dirty, almost rough, the next moment it's gentle and sweet.
I love this poem.
K x

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Posted 11 Years Ago


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Love is labeled on so many unlovely relationships... Yet this is reality. Darkness is reality... Makes me think of the phrase, "a Curse on God and die". Never a bright idea. 😏
Strong poetic voice. Vivid art.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow, this is a really nice love story.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I agree . Nice poem. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh! the last lines were perfect.

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Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really good!(: Twisted or not, it makes you think of more than one instance. I can see your thought process, and it's a good one.

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Posted 11 Years Ago


Interesting rhyming.
Love it.

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Posted 11 Years Ago


You're a great writer. I usually don't like poems about love or romantic relationships but i actually quite enjoyed reading yours. It's very polished and like the other reviewers said, has a little twisted element which i love.

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Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it

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Posted 11 Years Ago


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Kes
I can't entirely tell if you intended this to come across a little twisted, but that's how I see it. Don't get me wrong - I LOVE twisted. :)
"fractured throne" is so clever. It makes me think of splintered bones. I like the idea of a throne made out of splintered bones. "sloppy kisses lined with lullabies" is particularly outstanding too. One moment it's dirty, almost rough, the next moment it's gentle and sweet.
I love this poem.
K x

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

some really honest thoughts here. Always love getting a girls perspective on a relationship, it can only help what I can do for mine. I felt her and I in this, really good write.

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Meghan
Meghan

Raleigh, NC



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