My Sea of Darkness

My Sea of Darkness

A Poem by LittleLover
"

just how I see life.

"
I'm stuck in a little bubble,
Floating in a sea of darkness.
It always wants to take me,
Turn me in, corrupt me.
If I give myself over,
Even for a second,
Pop goes my bubble,
And I'm drowning in an instant. 
My thoughts go dark, 
And my vision gets blurry.
My mind starts to race,
Hurry! Hurry! 
I need to get out, 
Before I get stuck forever.
If I let myself over,
Fall under the darkness,
I wont be coming back, 
Not even for a second.
If I give myself over,
Horrible things will happen.
I'll lose control,
And before I know it, 
I'll lose it all..

© 2014 LittleLover


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Author's Note

LittleLover
I don't call for pity, or for sympathy, I simply want my writing to be read and judged. thank you for reading! :)

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Many kinds of places, prisons and walls of safety we can fall into. I understand this poem. Sometime we can fall into places we do not want. We must fight to keep our thoughts and self-will. I like the thoughts and struggle to keep the control. I like the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LittleLover

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)



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This is so deep! And another note, WHERE HAS ALL OF YOUR OTHER WRITING GONE?

Posted 6 Years Ago


I can relate to this, but in my opinion ive always found it better to embrace the darkness. To target what is really causing all of this fear. this is a great piece and its seems to be very personal written from the soul. great work

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is so powerful I can see everything thats happening!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Such an emotional piece of poetry, I am really impressed. Thanks for sharing. The Elusive Mr Dunne.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so emotionally deep! Keep venting through writing, and always know that I will be here for you. I love you! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that is so greatly done :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LittleLover

7 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
stars are far

7 Years Ago

welcome........
Words used beautifully......with great meaning behind them! Ossam write!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LittleLover

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
Many kinds of places, prisons and walls of safety we can fall into. I understand this poem. Sometime we can fall into places we do not want. We must fight to keep our thoughts and self-will. I like the thoughts and struggle to keep the control. I like the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LittleLover

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I'm stuck in a little bubble,
Floating in a sea of darkness.
It always wants to take me,
Great write, well expressed the state poet is in and do not want to be in it as the fear of recovering is way high

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LittleLover

7 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing! :)
Linda alexander

7 Years Ago

You welcome

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