Lackluster

Lackluster

A Poem by coffeedigest
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How I have felt about my writing recently.

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Normalcy stares back at me.

 

Reflected by a dirty mirror hung in my flat.

 

I haven’t cleaned it, ever.

 

“Almost” followed me,

from Main Street.

© 2015 coffeedigest


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ahahaha! love the nitty gritty of this expression sir! its kind of Kierkegaard meets Bukowski ..and Mr. coffee guy .. i am calling you uot to now read a few of mine :O !!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Well done, it's hard sometimes to make a perfect writing when you are feeling down, but you have done the opposite by making this wonderful piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


"Almost" followed me from main street. It's those almosts that keep us all going. Great title for a piece about the emotions of writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on October 18, 2015
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coffeedigest
coffeedigest

Syracuse, NY



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Hi, I am josh and am expectedly average at words. I am 21 and love coffee, I find my mind wandering in different coffee shops. So I figured I would create something productive out of thoughts. Criti.. more..

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