Why are we still trying? You are our love's Ms. Daisy - Whom I am stuck DRIVING!

Why are we still trying? You are our love's Ms. Daisy - Whom I am stuck DRIVING!

A Poem by cognitivetatum
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When you should be spat on. This is what I am thinking. When it was all a mistake...this is what im hearing.

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NEVER A MOMENT

God!
Youre a f*****g mess
wallowing in your self-distress
Better yet! Youre all alone
The pain that you suffer is all your own!

My wish fell away and Im back to this misery
Its TOO LATE to question our unstable unity
And all of the energy put on this shelf
Is more of a waste than anything else.

Im hell bent on finding what just cant be found
But its soon to find me and then take me down
to new lows and harder blows 
Our senseless security
Stuck by this comfort because it still soothes me

I just found myself today
While you wallowed round
And I SHUT YOU  UP
cause I just hate that sound
If it took just moments to capture this picture
Then pray tell - Why care?
of this duo we measure
 

Never a moment
Never the soft spoken

Ive found a bestfriend
in this friendly token.

Myself I decieved

When substaining devotion.

Both harboring blame

Yoked in senseless emotion


SO I SCREAM LIKE HELL!!!
Limbo still isn’t heaven
Our love once avail

Is a loaf left unleavened.

 

“I want all my DVDS BACK!!!!”

---“You never even watch them anymore!!”

“You dont masturbate to your old porn mags, can I take them?!!!”

--- “Take your stinking DVDS....”

© 2013 cognitivetatum


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awesomeness is here.........
well written..

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Power, Raw and full of emotion, well written. One of the best, F**k it i'm over you poems I've read on this site. It left room for reflection and interpretation at the same time. Mad respect for this style of writing. Stay strong, keep writing. - Kee

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cognitivetatum

8 Years Ago

Thanks man. Valuable feedback...

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Added on January 10, 2013
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Tags: daisy, faded, relationship, stuck, love lost, pointless, duo