Until i'm with you

Until i'm with you

A Poem by Colleen a Bean

Until i'm with you

 

As time creeps by
I try not to cry
Wondering when life will end
So i can start again
Someplace new
I will be up there with you
I cry, I weep, I don't sleep
I won't be me until i'm with you
A second
A minute
An hour 
A day
I'll wait a lifetime to be with you
hHolding you
Hugging you
Kissing you
Loving you
A week
A year
I wish you were here

© 2012 Colleen a Bean


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Colleen a Bean
I wrote this a long time ago and just found it tell me what u think

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Love can make you feel that you are only half alive, in your longing to be with your soul mate. Nothing can take your mind from thoughts of them, memories of them. This poem expresses your intent, very well.. By the way the spelling is "weep" not weap. You would do your readers a great service in using punctuation. They exist for a reason. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Colleen a Bean

10 Years Ago

Thanks I thought that was spelt wrong haha
it sounds like you're writing about a lover who died:( maybe a soldier or just someone who died at a young age:(

Posted 10 Years Ago


Colleen a Bean

10 Years Ago

lol ya it does but really I was just missing my ex really bad and it just felt like he was dead beca.. read more
Sounds like a military situation or.long distance that yearning is deeply rooted inside

Posted 10 Years Ago


Colleen a Bean

10 Years Ago

lol now that u mention it lol it kinda does haha
Poetic Beauty

10 Years Ago

It does to me
I think this has a very touching voice...tender, longing...lovely.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Colleen a Bean

10 Years Ago

Thanks haha

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Colleen a Bean
Colleen a Bean

Grygla, MN



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I am 18 and my name is colleen but my family calls me colleen a bean. I am a senior this year I am in cheerleading, an anti bully group, peer helping, knowledge bowl, LYO, and Drama club. I make frien.. more..

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