Thoughts whilst awakening...

Thoughts whilst awakening...

A Poem by Nirvana

The sweet nectar of love
now tastes of bitter poison
on your lips,
Yet you continue to indulge
in the spoiled memories
As if to show that your
"sacrifice"
proves you are still worthy
of drinking with those
who love purely.

© 2016 Nirvana


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This is short and cuts right to the point - don't mess with pure love - very well written!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

f**k this is so f*****g good.
"Yet you continue to indulge
in the spoiled memories
As if to show that your
"sacrifice" "


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aye! The receiving of "love" out of duty rather than desire leaves much to be desired. Very well said!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 18, 2016
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Nirvana
Nirvana

Boston, MA



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