Rambling I

Salty ocean air sending chills down my spine...
A comforting cool brushes over my skin.
There is nothing better than this.
This feeling is infinite.
Nothing better maybe...
except, for...your...
No. Nothing.

Reviews

[B J Hughes]

How delightful! Being from the flatlands of Ohio, I can relate to the reaction of salty ocean air. And it IS infinite, isn't it! But the whimsical finale, your wistful indecision, such a delight! Definitely 100/100 because it won't allow me to do 200/100!

[Nirvana]

Sometimes nothing can compare to the blissful feeling of being surrounded by nature ;)

[B J Hughes]

Aye, sometimes. And it's a shame that we are losing so much of it in the name of profit driven consumerism. :o(

[??????]

Short but to a beautiful point:) Pen away poet:)

[Davidgeo]

Generates a chuckle, but largely an empty one at an easy tired old joke.

You are proving to be overrated.

I truly am saddened by that. And I won't ever not tell you about it.

[Carolynn]

I love the smell and the sound of the ocean and love how you ended this with flirtatious indecision :) a fun poem that has me longing for the ocean, no wait maybe... No the ocean :)

[Nirvana]

Haha you've got it!