the stars scream beauty

the stars scream beauty

A Poem by Missy Mae
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about a boy who will never love me

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i know this sounds redundant
and so very cliched
but when ever i see your face
my heart goes off pace

because your eyes are the stars
and the stars scream beauty
you are loved by every girl near and far
you and only you can be compared to a star



© 2011 Missy Mae


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Missy Mae
please tell me if u like it :)

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"because your eyes are the stars
and the stars scream beauty"
That's a killer line, seriously. Bittersweet is your poem, your prose is fruitful. This is really good. Keep it up. And yes, I liked it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aw, its so cute.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I don't just like it, I love it! I liked how you compared unrequited love to a star. The boy is seen loved and admired from afar by many and he is inaccessible as if he's a million light years away. Well done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it beeestfraaan!(:

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on August 21, 2011
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Missy Mae
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Hi, my name is Missy Mae :) i have a beautiful family and amazing friends. there isn't a moment when i don't like a boy so there is always lovey mushy stuff :) more..

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