About Marylou

A poetic introspection; past, present and future 84 words

 

How can I describe me to you?

What can I say about Marylou?

Spiritual, describes the woman I wish to be.

Have I accomplished this successfully?

 

Sentimental as a child----

Throughout the years, mushy, slushy feelings are compiled.

Big tears gush from my eyes.

Tender stories result in blubbering cries.

 

Friends tell me I'm very shy.

I agree, this trait I won't deny.

This poem gives you a glimpse into my heart.

I am a work in progress, not yet Jehovah's work of art.

Reviews

[Damien]

I really like this because it shows that you write from the heart and that you're very passionate about what you take on in life. I think you never should stop writing because it simply amazes me how you write.

[Mary Swingler]

You made me cry and laugh at the same time, again.

[KWP]

Lovely and I think that everybody on WC should have to write a poem like this before they post.

You sound like one of those who are passionate about life and really know how to 'feel' - how blessed you are.

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[Mary Swingler]

Thank you for your loving words of kindness. tears of joy and a big smile are on my face and my heart.

[samparks,sam]

That feeling is nice
you really great feeling nice
I read your poem
now I every time
I try to write