The Solution

Another poem inspired by a farmer.

Stillness is not a frame my mind knows
It wanders from thing to thought in flashes
Never settling but for a millisecond at a time
Until it finds itself meandering in long slow thoughts
Of the you I am coming to know so readily and satisfyingly.
Lost in an echo of a simple thing you've murmured,
Deeply I breathe, catching the moment again
Savoring it like a bite of milk-sweet chocolate
Until I find myself at once calm, centered-
On the you I am coming to know now.
You make me feel at ease because
You are the piece that completes
The puzzle that my mind was
Always eager to solve.

Reviews

[Michael]

I like it a lot. I was just sitting here thinking you might try to mess with the formatting a bit and see if you can make the line lengths suggest a jig-saw puzzle piece.

[Eagle Cruagh]

SOLUTION !
My mind grabbed on to the word, but my solution
was`nt there.
Only a farmer on your mind, hmmmm ?
Guess a farmer needs you to make up your mind and
now that you have, I enjoyed the poem.
I find your poem to be erotic. I know, it was`nt meant
to be, but the feeling flowing through this is physical, thick.
Nice poem --- 100%
---- Eagle Cruagh