Who says?

Who says?

A Poem by The Invisible Girl

Who says that you have to be lonely because you're different?
Who says that you need to cut yourself to be happy again?
Who says that you have to be dating at the age thirteen?

Tell me. Who says?

Who says that you have to do drugs because its cool?
Who says that you have to drink your worries away with alcohol? 
Who says you have to be model skinny by not eating?   

Tell me. Who says?

Who says that you have to prove yourself? 
Who says that you have to perfect?

It is Society who says.
It tell us teenagers what we have to do to be cool, to be happy, to be perfect.
Don't you feel the pain? 
It's society trying to mold us into something we're not!
We don't have to allow society to win. 
The only solution is lean on someone who is always by your side and loves you. 
For me its God. 

For God says:
You will never be alone.
You will never fall.
You will never have to prove yourself.
You will never have to sad. 
You will never be unloved.

So stop listening to society! 
Just be you. 
Who says?
Me because you are special. 

© 2012 The Invisible Girl


Author's Note

The Invisible Girl
I feel like it similar to my other poem Through her Eyes..but whatever! I just hope you like it!! :)

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Wow I really. Like this :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

Thanks ^-^
Deep and intriguing, well expressed

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

Thanks for reading! ^-^
i beileve i have read this before. i must of just not commented. i reallllllly like it though :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

Thanks for reading!!!
beautiful dreamer

11 Years Ago

no problem! :)
I did like it :) people need some sense knocked into them! you don't need to be perfect or skinny or an alcoholic! thank you for writing this, as i couldn't have said it better myself.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

Thanks for reading!! ^-^
Good message. the important is you're happy on what you are doing as long as it is good. never mind what they are saying. you have you're own life and they have also their own lives. You are the one who control your life and not them.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

Thanks for reading! ^-^
I love it! This is so full of nothing but truth.

Great write, great message. ^^

Keep up the awesome work! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

Thanks for reading!! :)
Felicity's Eve

11 Years Ago

:)
AMEN!!!! There needs to be a whole church convention based on this poem! I LOVE it!
Love,
CreativeCookie

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

Thanks!! ^-^

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