Should I feel this way?

I can't stop the feeling

I should not be feeling this way

your perfect ,deceiving ,blue eyes

trap girls' hearts and keep them hidden

you show no mercy

you simply take what you think is yours

what's worse

I am the next target

and I am falling for you bad.

 

Your perfect shaped lips

where your lies and promises come out

are tempting to kiss

but I should not

you are the cheater 

a liar

I can't be falling for you

but I am

why do you have to look so innnocent

why can't my heart see the trap that you are going to set

I'm blinded by your looks, but that can't be all

there is a reason you cheat

 

you are insecure

and I see that

you're scared the no one will love you in return

so you cheat on them before they can cheat on you

but I won't

I love you

even if you are a mess

 

so aim and fire

I will never run away

you'll never have to cheat again

because I love you.

Author's Note

Wrote this out of random. Thought it would enjoyable. I guess it's working since you are reading this! :) so comments?

Reviews

[Katrina Saaresto]

This is very nice! I like the intensity of it and what you are talking about. You are a great poet, my friend.
Keep up the great job!

[The Invisible Girl]

You really think so? I always feel like my poems are cheesy. But thanks that means a lot to me. :)

[Katrina Saaresto]

Your poems aren't cheesy! I don't believe in poems being cheesy. The writer knows well why they choose they words they do and the topics they write about and how they write about it. Each poem should be special in its own way just b/c it is written the way it is. I don't think that any poem is lame, or boring, or anything like that and yours are not only good, but rather great.

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks! ^-^ Your poem was amazing too! Can't wait to read more poems from you! :D

[Katrina Saaresto]

Thanks! It has been years since I have written down a word in regards to making poems but I'm glad that this poem was of your taste! :D

[Euro]

This is a really nice poem! I like the message of it because it's strong and is real.
Keep it up,
-Penelope H.

[The Invisible Girl]

Glad you like it! :) Hope you read more of my work!

[Euro]

Yeah, I take my slow time reviewing my read requests so you aren't the only one whose writing I haven't read. As soon as I have the time, I'll go through your writing and review. Are you writing a story? I think I was reading it but kost track of it. Could you send me a RR, please? Thank you.

[The Invisible Girl]

Haha! That's okay. Whenever you get the time to look at some of work it would be great. Yeah I am writing a book..not the greatest but I work very hard on it. I will send you a read request right now. :)

[AlwaysCasey]

Nice! Love it :) I thought it was BB but then I saw the blue eyes part so i figured it wasn't him...

[The Invisible Girl]

No. :) its not. I just wrote it out of random. I wanted to know what my feelings would be if I was in love with a cheater or a bad boy. lol Glad you enjoyed! :)

[teardrop]

know this feeling, this is deep and emotional.

[Horizon K.]

Oo..is this for the crush or random? There is a lot of complexity wrapped up in this. He cheats because he is insecure and yet so good looking. No matter how good looking or crushed after, someone may have self confidence and trust issues that hopefully real love can cure. I think the only word I wasn't fond of was "normal". Does a hot guy look normal?...They're rare so I think not:)

[The Invisible Girl]

Just random! :) Thanks for reading!

[Anna]

That's awesome! It really shows how deceiving looks are, and how difficult it can be to listen to your brain rather than your heart. I love it :)

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks for reading!!!! ^-^