A Poem by The Invisible Girl

Did you get my call

Or didn't you notice it ringing at all?

I try to get your attention.

But all I got was detention


I guess that is what I get for being invisible.


With a broken heart, I sat on my bed

I feel like I'm dead

I turned up my radio to make me smile.

But it was hard enough just to turn the dial.


I guess I should be blamed for

I should tried harder to open the doors

that God had set out for me.


Next time I'll try harder.

Maybe I'll be happier. 

Maybe I won't be so lonely no more.


I start feeling hope brewing inside of me.

I smiled for the first time in awhile

Tomorrow will be better.

I can just feel it.

© 2013 The Invisible Girl

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Wow, i think it's a 2 minutes short song. isn't it... liked this song even i loved here your rhyming way. I'm still screaming your this song on/in my mind. I think you made this song when you were alone...feeling sad at home... isn't it & then you turned on your Radio and listened to music. isn't it...
your this write's also very nice and it's even filled with your scent foresure. If i Honestly say then i really don't have words to say to your this write.

But i wanna say "BEAUTIFUL" that;s it :) you're a great writer "Invisible girl", hey, aren't you planning to beat me in this field.. !! Lol i think you're going very well and you've made so much nice songs than me.
you know what dearest your starting was an incredible view for me to get stat my read indeed. I love your first stanza allot.

so,again you're gonna deserve this 500/100 but this time 500 + 500 / 100 = 1000 / 100 :) !
keep writing, you're just few steps away from your "Aim" :)
go ahead and hit the cliffs of success :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is a really nice poem! I love the transition from the sadness to that feeling of hope. It's so beautiful when we can find that ray of light in the middle of a tunnel of darkness.
Keep it up,

Posted 10 Years Ago

The Invisible Girl

10 Years Ago

Thanks! Glad you like it!! :D
Katrina Saaresto

10 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
The Invisible Girl

10 Years Ago


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