Love

Love

A Poem by The Invisible Girl

With all my heart
I love you so
Set me free
And then you'll know

Rescue me from this horrible tower
Maybe under stars that's where we'll be

Wishing a fallen star
Wonder if you'll come at all
Throw a coin in a wishing well
Hoping that you'll be with me
Be with me in wonderland

When you smile the way you do
Sends chills down my spine
When you wink at me
I can't help but blush
When you touch my hand
It feels like I'm flying
When you kiss me
I feel like I'm falling
Falling right Into your arms

Lights are now on us
This must be a dream
We danced under the silver moon
With fireflies at our ankles
This must be a fairytale
We locked eyes and knew for sure that
This was love!

No more wishing on a fallen star
You did came to rescue me

No more throwing worthless coins in a wishing well
we are already in wonderland!

© 2013 The Invisible Girl


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very sweet and romantic little poem about love i really enjoyed it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is really amazing and what a beautiful love you describe here. Wishing it could be that way for reals in my world, maybe someday. Hope its real for you right now.

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is so romantically sweet

Posted 9 Years Ago


So romantic and wistful!!! Catching the crush! Is there anything better?! .. But did you mean to say sent in the third line?

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is so sweet! :3 Makes me kinda wistful..... I really wish my mom could've had this... I'm tired of my drunken, abusive father.... >.> Meanwhile my mom's an angel and she kinda teared up while reading this cuz it's so good that I had to show her! :')

Maybe this is my future... Hopefully.... I iz scared of falling in love.... I'm such a coward, I know XD

Great write and read ^-^

100/100

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

9 Years Ago

Thanks! I want to give you a big hug!!! :D *hugs* lol Don't worry your Prince Charming will come and.. read more
Felicity's Eve

9 Years Ago

:)
The Invisible Girl

9 Years Ago

:)

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