Just be you.

Just be you.

A Poem by The Invisible Girl

There was a girl who was looking in a mirror
She had smile on her face
But tears fell down her face

She wasn't the most prettiest girl
But she said she didn't care
Though deep inside she thought
She wasn't pretty enough

The Insecurities
all lies
She heard
She cries, and cries
Until her Father came

Father, o' Father
Tell me it isn't true
Daddy, Daddy
Am I beautiful?

She felt the eyes on her
As she passes through the hallway
Laughs and sneers
Were the music in her ears

The voices sang to her,
"She is ugly."
" She is way too fat."
"Her hair is also way too flat."
"Her eyes are way too big."
" Why can't she be like us?"

But to their surprise
She held her head up high
Because of what her Father told her
last night

You are beautiful.
You are perfect.
Never listen those damn lies
You wonderful .
You are spectacular
Never change who you are!
Those insecurities
They are fake
Plus I love you
Now go show the world who you truly are

Now she never looks back
She looks toward the future.
Honor her parents and praising her God
So no more sad days
No more insecurities
She just a girl with many different dreams.

© 2013 The Invisible Girl


Author's Note

The Invisible Girl
I wrote this as encouragement to love who you are! :D

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i love the whole story line to this, I love the sweet father daughter part, and i love the ending. No one should have to feel ugly or insecure about who they are. Everyone is different and unique in there own way and thats what makes them well them. I enjoyed it keep writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


It shows how everyone should be

Posted 9 Years Ago


"Laughs and sneers , were the music in her ears" is my favorite line. Musical, and memorable. As the proud father of a wonderful daughter I was touched by this piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ah.. lovely!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


A wonderful and encouraging message to all girls! I really like this. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

9 Years Ago

Thanks! Glad you like it! :)
Half Dream

9 Years Ago

You're very welcome. ^_^
This was a beautiful, encouraging poem! Thank you for sharing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading!!!!!! :D
CreativeStroke

9 Years Ago

You're welcome!
The Invisible Girl

9 Years Ago

:D
this poem is really good :D it does encourage people who may feel like they are not pretty enough :D I thought this once, but then my friends kept telling me that I really am pretty and I actually started to believe them. Now I am myself and I don't care what other people think of me and your poem I can relate to :D Great job writing this :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

9 Years Ago

Thanks!!! :D
Stormie Sky

9 Years Ago

your welcome :D
The Invisible Girl

9 Years Ago

:)
this is the sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetest and most beautiful and most importantly, the loveliest poem i ever read!!!!!!!!!!..........hats off!!!!!!!!!!! dear it deeplly touched my heart.......
very well done!!! good and keep it up!!
with best wishes,
saumya

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

9 Years Ago

Glad you liked it!! :D
The battle girls today have to face.. All the people on this earth are beautiful. They don't need make up. There beautiful because they are themselves. Great write :3

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading! :D
Awww!! I love this!!!!! Such a wonderful and powerful write! :D Nice write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

9 Years Ago

Oh yeah..chapter 12 will be Andrei's
The Fallen

9 Years Ago

:3 awsomee
The Invisible Girl

9 Years Ago

:D

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