To Fly

I just want to fly

 until the fourth of July

To explore the unknown 

And meet new people

I want to spread my wings

And let the wind take me

Because that where I want be

Adventures at every turn

Trying new foods

And experiencing different cultures

Flying like Wonder Woman

but without the suit

To fly around the world

can be lonesome 

And would not be as fun 

Without someone special flying by my side

But for now I fly alone

Until I find the right flying partner 

Wherever the wind may take me  

 I would still be happy to be able to fly  

and spread the good news

Of Jesus Christ. 

 

Reviews

[Criss ;)]

Now you're Reaching out My dear friend. I'm seeing here that you've improved yourself so much... this time your Rhyme was so nice and i was reading this poem as i was singing a song :) Greatly done by you dear friend. I liked your this poem or a song. I love your words your applied in this song :) All words're enjoyable still and starting as well as your awesome ending both were cool :) 10000000000000000/100 :)

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks! :) glad u liked it.

[Criss ;)]

I always love your work but this time i gotta say "YOU'VE IMPROVED MUCH YOURSELF" :P
I think if you make such kind of more pieces, i'm sure you'll be a professional writer very soon :)

[The Invisible Girl]

Hehe thanks! :) i do hope that one day i can publish some of my books. :)

[Criss ;)]

Wow, Sounds great now much :) so, my all best wishes're with you and start work on writing some awesome books, i know you can write so you'll :) and hey, let me know as you write your books :) ok :) i'd love to read them first :)

[The Invisible Girl]

Haha okay. :)