Lies

Lies

A Poem by The Invisible Girl

All those lies

That you thought you could hide

Are more annoying than some pesky flies

 

I thought I could trust you

But all you did was mask it with another fat lie

High, High

So high did I fall

 

Yet you were never there 

to catch me

I feel, I feel

I feel so dumb

for ever trusting you from the start

 

I thought I could believe you

but even my friend thinks it is you

Lies, Lies

So many lies

Don't you see that your killing me

 

Killing me inside......

© 2013 The Invisible Girl


Author's Note

The Invisible Girl
Yes, its not really good, but I just needed to vent out. ughh I hate when people lie to me!
:(

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I liked the song. Keep up the good work you too!

Posted 5 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

5 Years Ago

Well if you ever have a question when ur writing just message me on here.
Neon

5 Years Ago

~Ok~
That'd be great! Thanks!
The Invisible Girl

5 Years Ago

Your welcome! :)
True talent, indeed! You are a wonderful writer. I really understood how you felt. Getting feelings across to the reader can be very difficult, but you do it wonderfully!

Posted 5 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

5 Years Ago

Thanks! That means a lot to me!! :)
I like it, very nice piece. Keep writing :) Thankyou for sharing! :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Those people should realize their mistakes or feeling shame on their lies ... I think they should do apologize to god if they lie to anyone .. because humans are the gifted of god and if they feel sorry to god , feel shame on what they done .. then their lies'd automatically be washed out and god bless them to restart the life again in a new way ... without lies .. without hurts :)

Sometimes lies make someone happy but sometimes they don't .. but when the lies hurt someone and hurts someone's heart then everyone should apologize to god if they lie to someone and run with the life peacefully :)
Nice poem, Invisible girl. Your going very good, just keep writing. Everybody's love to see you as a writer .. as an author one day with big names. 100/100 :) Keep it up!
May god bless you.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Heartfelt words are always good.. The emotions you are trying to portray are evidently etched out..

Posted 5 Years Ago


I could definitely relate to this,
and I felt the strong emotion all the way through.

I thought the ending stanza was really powerful,
"Don't you see that you're killing me Killing me inside......".

This was written from your heart.
Very well written, and beautifully expressed!




Posted 5 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

5 Years Ago

Thanks for reading!!!! :D
Calissa Knox

5 Years Ago

It was my pleasure! :)

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Added on October 2, 2013
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Tags: lies, disappointment

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