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A Poem by Jada Johnson
"

have you found the one you want to get lost with?

"

 He touched every ounce of her body, 

while she emphasized that her heart couldn’t be given to just anybody 



anna gave you the tools and the wings to fly, 

leading you to the place where you and Asia now reside 



let's take it one day at a time and individually shine, 

while we drown out those who try and hit our hotline



 forever in her mind undressing it and revealing emotions

 curved beneath her skin

 both anticipating when the real games will begin



as the world rotates and twirls and offers pour in, 

she’s the one he wants and it's easily a win 



writing back and forth has been an ongoing thing,

expressing the love that’ll lead to nothing but diamond rings 



this journey has bumps and isn’t so splendid, 

but the connection is real so there's no room for pretending 



she’s outstanding, moves so immaculate, love so accurate, 

the whole story is matchless



summertime will come where our hearts will meet again,

 the challenges will show and will be defeated 



her heart is completed, no one can steal it,

 if her heart could speak it’ll say you’re the only one I’ll be with



no need to seduce she just wants to feel something new, 

lost in a paradise 

reliving the first night with

you

















© 2018 Jada Johnson


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The poem gentle, hopeful and wonderful.
"no need to seduce she just wants to feel something new, 
lost in a paradise 
reliving the first night with
you"
The above lines. Perfect. Thank you Jada for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jada Johnson

2 Years Ago

thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome Jada.



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Wonderful words and strong belief of a love that’s true and everlasting- amazing if two hearts agree and follow the love written of here- full of feeling and when reading takes you to the very heart of the love itself- enjoyed reading🌹

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jada Johnson

2 Years Ago

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

My pleasure🌹
Aww, that was so sweet, teary eyed saying great job...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

On a poem of yours I read earlier, I said I like your nebulous approach, but this one is a little too nebulous for me to follow as a cohesive story in a poem. But still, I recognize many things that are well-stated & suggest some ideas in my mind. I'm wondering if "anna" is anorexia? I'm not sure who or what Asia is, tho. Overall it seems like the guy is more into this relationship than the narrator. I see the familiarity of getting to know a person & falling in love online, mainly thru messages (true-to-life for today's typical hookups). I like the way you wrap the ending up in a way that returns us to the beginning, about who & how her heart can be had/given. But there's still much tentative expression coming from the narrator, so I'm wondering if she is anorexic & she can't really give herself fully becuz of this overriding focus in her life? (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Years Ago


The poem gentle, hopeful and wonderful.
"no need to seduce she just wants to feel something new, 
lost in a paradise 
reliving the first night with
you"
The above lines. Perfect. Thank you Jada for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jada Johnson

2 Years Ago

thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome Jada.

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