love lost

love lost

A Poem by conversations with her pen..

Fries & Feels from Amirah Tajdin on Vimeo.

*please leave a message after the tone* 

hey its me 

you know 

the one you left behind

i could never fully tap into your mind 

i mean 

you could paint my clouds 

but have me thinking 

there is someone else you long for 

but here i am asking for more 

just another fling of yours

lets be real 

you weren't real to me 

just wrong for me 


i’m not asking for an apology you could've been good to me 

this wasn't suppose to be a long voicemail 

i must not cry over split milk 

couldn't be your friend 

so we've made it to the end 

well this was short lived whatever this is 

© 2022 conversations with her pen..

Author's Note

conversations with her pen..
Based on a short film called fries and feelings by Amirah Tajdi.

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"you could paint my clouds"
I like that line, it could mean carefully like a Rembrandt or haphazardly like a Pollock...
and some relationships cannot move to the level of friends if the romantic part does not work out.

Posted 8 Months Ago

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8 Months Ago

thank you for your review jacob,
I agree with what you said as well. Sometimes the love you .. read more

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Added on March 10, 2022
Last Updated on March 10, 2022


conversations with her pen..
conversations with her pen..


"where the title meets the ending" i do not give consent for my work to be copied. thank you. more..