love lost

love lost

A Poem by conversations with her pen..

Fries & Feels from Amirah Tajdin on Vimeo.



*please leave a message after the tone* 


hey its me 


you know 


the one you left behind


i could never fully tap into your mind 


i mean 


you could paint my clouds 


but have me thinking 


there is someone else you long for 


but here i am asking for more 


just another fling of yours


lets be real 


you weren't real to me 


just wrong for me 


and 


i’m not asking for an apology you could've been good to me 


this wasn't suppose to be a long voicemail 


i must not cry over split milk 


couldn't be your friend 


so we've made it to the end 


well this was short lived whatever this is 

© 2022 conversations with her pen..


Author's Note

conversations with her pen..
Based on a short film called fries and feelings by Amirah Tajdi.

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"you could paint my clouds"
I like that line, it could mean carefully like a Rembrandt or haphazardly like a Pollock...
and some relationships cannot move to the level of friends if the romantic part does not work out.
j.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

conversations with her pen..

8 Months Ago

thank you for your review jacob,
I agree with what you said as well. Sometimes the love you .. read more

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