Hurting For Love

Hurting For Love

A Poem by Vanessa
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uhm...yeahh. gimme ideas?

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I think of you, and I know where my home is.

Im falling for you, so I dont know where my head is.

I need you, so I need to back away.

Im hurting, and im scared, so here I will lay.

© 2010 Vanessa


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Vanessa
ideas anyone?

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think you've written a good four lines here. are you planning to continue this? if so how about this:
"When i see you, brighter than when the stars shine,
When I think of you, I smile 'cause I know you're mine.
In my heart, a chasm grows, for you deep inside,
And for you to wipe away the tears i've cried..."
just came up with those on the spot, just random thoughts...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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think you've written a good four lines here. are you planning to continue this? if so how about this:
"When i see you, brighter than when the stars shine,
When I think of you, I smile 'cause I know you're mine.
In my heart, a chasm grows, for you deep inside,
And for you to wipe away the tears i've cried..."
just came up with those on the spot, just random thoughts...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think of you I think of home
if I fell for you would you leave
me alone. I'm hurting and bruised
feeling hallow inside should I show
some emotion or foolish pride.

(How about something like that for a idea)


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 4, 2010
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Vanessa
Vanessa

Glen Burnie, MD



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