Waiting For You

Waiting For You

A Poem by Vanessa

I did all that I could.

To make you notice me.

I was there more than I should.

But you still couldn’t see.

How I love every bit of your smile.

How I’m mesmerized when I look into your eyes.

I wish you would just look right in front of you.

Cause I’ve been standing here.

Waiting for the time when you’d see this girl waiting for you. All along.

You’re talking about her.

And all her perfections.

Wanting to get to know her.

But you never really knew me.

How I love every bit of your smile.

How I’m mesmerized when I look into your eyes.

I’m in front of you again.

And you tease me with your laugh.

Not knowing.

How these little things.

Keep me going.

Not knowing.

This girl you’ve known for years

Had always been dreaming.

That you’d.

…Just look.

Right in front of you.

And really see what she’s going through.

Cause I’ve been standing here waiting for the time when you’d see me.

And how I’m waiting for you.

All along.

© 2010 Vanessa


Author's Note

Vanessa
a piece of lyrics not yet finished

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I agree with Undying Glory. This would make an amazing song. & a lot of people could relate.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hope you finish this soon. thought this was brilliant lyrics, and this would make a hell of a song. awesome

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very nice writing, love it. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


i loved it

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really like this. It would be good to read it when it's finished :)


Posted 11 Years Ago



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Vanessa
Vanessa

Glen Burnie, MD



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