small ideas **

small ideas **

A Poem by Vanessa
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pieces im hoping will come together as my future lyrics

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I feel the sun. But I’ve never touched it.

I look at the world. But I never see it.

I breathe. But I’ve never lived.

 

Stranger in the Wind

Lost and trampled, she remains.

No one will lend a hand to a stranger.

© 2010 Vanessa


Author's Note

Vanessa
im gonna keep adding to this, as i think of moreee.
IDEAS = ME HAPPY!!

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I really enjoyed this write.
Sad but true too...your last line.
well stated words!

Posted 11 Years Ago



I hear the wind, but I've never played it

I've seen your heart, but I've never held it

"No one will lend a hand to a stranger"
unless their one themselves...

Cool stuff Vanessa, keep em coming.
Antonio :)


Posted 11 Years Ago


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Vanessa

Glen Burnie, MD



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