laying in bed

laying in bed

A Poem by falling_toxic_rain
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There's a lot going through my mind-quick write nothing down whatever crosses my mind

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Walked 100,000 thousands miles
In my head they seem to bounce-
Wall to wall,
They seem to hide:
Everytime I grab a pen
They disapear into the thin'

Fade away-wash up ashore
Break the pain I once heard
To that child
Who no longer is-
I'll take this pain-

Been gone a while-seems like eternity
Missing from a time once remembed-to short
But longer than most my life.

Eyes of buttons, heart torn out.
Sew them back.
Stitches to scars.

© 2013 falling_toxic_rain


Author's Note

falling_toxic_rain
Really...I just wrote whatever came to mind...trying to figure out what it meandering though..

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I don't blame you we all have days we just write down what we think and try to make sense of it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


soulesswriter

10 Years Ago

I forgot to say I liked it and u kept it interesting to the end
falling_toxic_rain

10 Years Ago

yea I think that's what this is really about, random thoughts and trying to make sense of it.
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I honestly believe this is the way it all is in our heads before he concious mind takes over and reigns it in. This was a wonderful flow of transient thoughts. Somewhere to nowhere and everyplace to a place unknown. That's the best mental way of musing! Awesomeness! =)

Aaron

Posted 11 Years Ago


falling_toxic_rain

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your kind review.^^

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Added on January 21, 2013
Last Updated on January 21, 2013
Tags: random, mind, head, brain, thoughys, depression

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falling_toxic_rain
falling_toxic_rain

Utopia, CA



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Get to know me: I am an open book, you can know me better than anyone has ever known me by reading my writes. I've never met anyone who has fully understood any of my works, so if you like try it,.. more..

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