dead fishy

dead fishy

A Poem by falling_toxic_rain
"

childish thoughts

"

"fishy is dead

he drowned

from crying to much,"

 

"fishy is dead,

I've got no friend,"

 

"fishy is dead,

he never said much

is that why he cried?",

 

"fishy is dead,

he drowned

from crying too much..."

© 2013 falling_toxic_rain


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Word-craft is my favorite part of a poem, and this is well crafted. I enjoyed the silliness, and seriousness at the same time. Est bene factum.

Posted 10 Years Ago


falling_toxic_rain

10 Years Ago

thank you very much^^
I like the way this is penned. Youthful and conveying sadness nicely.

Posted 10 Years Ago


falling_toxic_rain

10 Years Ago

thanks again:)
A good read and write for children and adults...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


falling_toxic_rain

10 Years Ago

thank you:)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
Its simple yet elegant, its message is so childish and obvious but the words grow into something that has such a deeper message that it just flows over you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


falling_toxic_rain

10 Years Ago

thanks you :)
I really enjoyed reading this! It is just so amazing yet kind of serious in a child like way at the same time... I love it. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


falling_toxic_rain

11 Years Ago

thanks!
I could so see a 3 or 4 year old saying something like this when his goldfish dies. Brilliant! =)

Aaron

Posted 11 Years Ago


falling_toxic_rain

11 Years Ago

Yea, I don't know how I came up either this.
Thanks.
JD Robin

9 Years Ago

I really enjoyed this piece of writing and the image it conveyed.

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Added on January 25, 2013
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falling_toxic_rain

Utopia, CA



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