Missing A Part Of Me

Missing A Part Of Me

A Poem by :)Hannah~!

                               Missing A Part Of Me   


When there was you and me I was whole

Now that your gone, I'm missing a part of me.

You said it was best, but how can it be   

Because you were part of me

Nobody understands how much I love you

They couldn't possibly see

I hate that your gone and it makes everything wrong

And I feel like I'm missing a part of me   

They say that I should move on with my life

But no, I'll wait for you

Because without you I'll always be missing a part of me

© 2009 :)Hannah~!

Author's Note

Well, I actually wrote this for a contest. I think it's ok, but not the best. Please write reviews. Hope you've enjoyed.

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i enjoyed it really good

Posted 12 Years Ago

You message is clear delivered in poetic prose. But you must move on yesterday is history

Posted 12 Years Ago

This is very convincing. Envisioning a chunk taken out of your side. Certainly that is what it feels like when we loose someone loved. Great poem! Thanks for entering the Missing Him, Missing Her contest.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on January 17, 2009



?!?!?!?!, KY

Heyyyy!!! My name is Hannah. Im 12 years old, and I absolutely love to write(Thats why I'm here of course!) I also like to sing, dance, draw, and hang out with all my friends!!!!! I have 2 sisters tha.. more..

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