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A Poem by :)Hannah~!

                                                                 Do You See Me?

 

Do you see me when I look at you

Do you see me when I talk about you

Do you notice me at all?

Do you notice her

Do you laugh with her

Do you notice me at all?

Do you see me when I'm needing you

Do you see me when she's around

Do you see me when the moon shines down

Do you see me at all?

 

 

 


© 2009 :)Hannah~!


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:)Hannah~!
This is for another contest, but your free to review and rate. I just thought that this was a little on the bad side. I don't know!

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Quite heartbreaking. The whole, "girl likes boy but boy doesn't know girl exists" ordeal. Well written, simple and to the point but enough so that the poem allows me to experience the pains someone might feel when yearning for someone they can't have. I think we've all been there before.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on January 17, 2009

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:)Hannah~!

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Heyyyy!!! My name is Hannah. Im 12 years old, and I absolutely love to write(Thats why I'm here of course!) I also like to sing, dance, draw, and hang out with all my friends!!!!! I have 2 sisters tha.. more..

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A Poem by :)Hannah~!