Sometimes It's not what you expect

Sometimes It's not what you expect

A Poem by Corkee1808
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This is just something/

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So shy 
Reserved 
Held Back
 I kind of Like A lad like that..  His smile warms me to the bone. 
 His eyes remind me of falling snow. I am not with him and I dare not even try..
The only thing I ever want is not in my reach..
It's not my fault it just happens you know?
But anyways I think your amazing said by the one and only me
       P.S You and I make the perfect WE

© 2011 Corkee1808


Author's Note

Corkee1808
This is about this guy friend of mine

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Great poem, really cute :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sweet.. nicely done..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It was really good. Keep up the great work. Kat24

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great job Courtnee!!!:) that was amazing. it warmed me just reading it. LOLz:) see ya in intro 2 business! Keep up the good work:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely done. Your feelings came across perfectly for visions were laid out before all. Bravo!

Mags xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh well it was a good poem and very creative to let your feeling out in your own way and good luck with this guy friend of yours; he sounds great and so did your poem. So well done=D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A lovely poem...
love it :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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