Electricity

Electricity

A Poem by CosminDZS
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wrote this in a Physics lecture

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An electric haze on the horizon
brief connections of lightning
sky to ground, ground to sky
static in the air, a current flow
like copper
a taste of iron and blood
because electricity
only exists
around the wire and not within it.

I see the blue fog
and the glorious lights
of sparks and connection
meeting to create
a grand landscape
of dark then light,
clear then dim.           

Within that fog
I see shapes and figures,
silhouetted in vibrant intensity.
The Other Ones
who we cannot see
in natures pattern and
electricity.

© 2013 CosminDZS


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Breathtaking—I love the description/imagery you used. I can kinda see the relation to physics as well. I can't quite tell why, but this poem really spoke to me, good job :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


CosminDZS

10 Years Ago

I appreciate it! Mind sharing with me what you felt about it? I would really like to know :)
Louvegrise14

10 Years Ago

It feels like a mystery—what are "The Other Ones," I wonder? And the "electric haze" and "static" .. read more

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Added on December 19, 2013
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Tags: electricity, physics, mystery, nature, pattern

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CosminDZS
CosminDZS

Canada



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