There by the Doorway

There by the Doorway

A Poem by CosminDZS
"

it's about my cat

"

It was just my cat,
such a beautiful cat
it sat and licked
its white and frosty fur
sitting there
by the doorway
the lapping sound
like smacking lips
it licked itself
by the doorway.

At my doorway
it sat and paraded
its freshened,
whitened winter coat.
Then sat and settled
for me to gloat.
The cat was happy
in this abode
for it was warm and
plenty milk had flowed.

The cat decided
to sleep alone
there by the doorway
such a sweet and
pleasant thing to see,
your cat asleep
there by the doorway.

Yet I had gone to
drift asleep when
pale white arms
had come to steal
a life from me in
the depths of my sleep
so that I awoke to see
an empty, cold and
miserable doorway.

© 2014 CosminDZS


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Sad :( It was definitely good though. Good job+Kudos :)(:

Posted 10 Years Ago


aww too sad....well penned x

Posted 10 Years Ago


The ending left me sad. That is what happens in life though, you depend on something being there and then it is gone. It speaks the truth of life. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


CosminDZS

10 Years Ago

As long as it left you with something, thank you for the kind words.
I think this if by far the cutest thing I ever read!

Posted 10 Years Ago


CosminDZS

10 Years Ago

Cute? Oh gosh, I guess I'll settle with cute heh. Thank you.
Was the cat an illusion.?..sometimes I get lost in your visions...
Cat in bed...or cat in head..?

Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

OH..sorry..I didn't get that..sorry...
Scott
CosminDZS

10 Years Ago

lol don't worry it's just a cat
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

:)
Scott.....
A priviledged cat perhaps. A wonderful and cute write...:).............

Posted 10 Years Ago


CosminDZS

10 Years Ago

A privileged *brat, more like
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Hahaha...I knew it...Lol

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Added on February 3, 2014
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Tags: animal, pets, death, life, cats

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CosminDZS
CosminDZS

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