listen muse!

A writer's request to their muse

Muse muse! Awaken my mind!
Boil this blood with written rhymes!

Muse, wound this whitened page!
Pour my thoughts with gusting rage!

Choose my victims so they read
Bewitch them, so they never leave!

cut them deep with what I think!
Stitch my pain inside their skins..

Author's Note

Looking forward to them reviews, hit me

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

Well Costa, such fury!!! Perhaps your Muse is telling you to petition her sweetly, and then I am sure the words will come flowing! But actually I rather like your poem, and in some way I can identify!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lord this is powerful .Indeed dear muse grant us inspiration so that we tell our story and our pens sprout wings and fly across the page and leave those who read our ramblings enthralled.This is our forever plea.Wonderful writing:)

[Leah Nicole Somers]

That's some deep words of pain I liked it

[costa siwale]

Thanks Leah..glad you read it

[K. Hicks]

Ive been to the point where I have wanted to yell at my muse lmao I love how this is written i love the flow of the words!

[costa siwale]

Touche' ..thank you so much for reading Hicks

[K. Hicks]

Welcome :D

[Horizon K.]

Ouch, this hit me! Very fun piece...Choose my victims so they read... Bewitch them so they never leave... and Love those last two lines... Yes, when a poet cuts the reader deep, the reader will surely return for more.

[costa siwale]

Wow! Thanks K .. I love that you love it..

[Dye]

I love that this feels like witchcraft, and reads like a chant. Sometimes the muse just needs a good talking to, to get them to work their magic.

[costa siwale]

You totally right dye, thanks for the comment, guess my witchcraft might just be working lol

[Hotwater]

Five stars!... very well done indeed.

*bird*

[costa siwale]

Thanks alot, I appreciate..thank you

[Dr. Wood ?]

I liked a lot of this...Some great lines pertaining to the 'muse'

[costa siwale]

Am glad you like it, thank you so much

[Death Girl]

I love this. It is short but good. I love the imagery in this. I like what I have read of your work so far

[costa siwale]

Thank you soo much, your words are inspiring

[L4rn13]

Very bold and though short very powerful with imagery.
Good use of words and rhythm. I hope to read more of your poetry :)

[costa siwale]

Thank you, much appreciated