Hail nature!

Hail nature!

A Poem by costa siwale
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As poets we all love nature and the elements, go green and preserve

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In water's waves
Fire's flames
Air's gusty wind.
Earth's dust
tree leaves
icy chilly feel.

In whis-per-ings
Shiny things
Green grass that sways.
Starring skies
Luna eyes
Even sunny rays.

Nature speaks through all of these,
So lend a listening ear.
And let grow, until there's more
So we may still be here.

© 2013 costa siwale


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i like the effect in stanza two, line one. good work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


costa siwale

7 Years Ago

thank you so much for taking the time to read. I appreciate it, and will return the favour
Beautiful imagery, personification, and rhyming. Your love of nature shines through every line! Lydi***

Posted 7 Years Ago


costa siwale

7 Years Ago

thank you for reading Lydia
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1VJ
The first verse is nicely syncopated leading down the path to personification mid the forces of nature and a critical message to be heeded.

Posted 7 Years Ago


costa siwale

7 Years Ago

indeed...and thank you for taking time to read Paloma. much appreciated
I enjoyed this Costa. I like the sudden bursts of natural images and the positive message at the end. CD

Posted 7 Years Ago


costa siwale

7 Years Ago

am glad you enjoyed it. thank you for reading my friend
I love the song-like quality of this poem. Excellent

Posted 7 Years Ago


costa siwale

7 Years Ago

exactly what i was going for lol, thank you so much for reading Stanley R
your words are so organic and flow freely it really spoke to me if only more people thought like you the world might not be becoming so bare you planted a seed of caring in my heart and i thank you for that (:

Posted 7 Years Ago


costa siwale

7 Years Ago

thank you so much for reading, your words are so refreshing
TheAimlessWanderer

7 Years Ago

you are most welcome my friend feel free to send me some read request i would love to read them (:
Well penned write. Though sad, it flows so nice. Keeps the reader interested. Thanks, for sharing. Eva

Posted 7 Years Ago


costa siwale

7 Years Ago

thank you so much Eva
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Pax
you have a unique flow my friend, it flows beautifully and well expressed on how you see our nature, sadly due to our greed its almost bald...

Posted 8 Years Ago


costa siwale

8 Years Ago

Thank you Pax
I love this poem. It's beautifully written. I love the compliments you gave, to the beauty that is nature.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow! I really felt to be with nature while reading your poem. Wonderfully crafted...

Posted 8 Years Ago


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costa siwale
costa siwale

Lusaka , southern region, Zambia



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