THE CALL (CORE)

THE CALL (CORE)

A Poem by costa siwale
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A simple piece about mother earth...

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Skies leak, with tears of Gods

Soak the earth in their essence

the dark descends below

into lightless cracks and crevices

Where devils slumber.


The earth! She burns to life above

With grass and greens and things,

While she rots at her core.


Poetic! The harbourer of life answers

Death’s call.

© 2017 costa siwale


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costa siwale
Your comments and reviews are very welcome. Thank you and much appreciated.

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You carry us from the skies, then into the center of the earth and back out again in an incredible poetic journey. Yes, it could have been longer, but it still stands pretty strong how it is. The only thing that I might suggest is that you lose the black and red that surround the poem which to my eye takes away from it. Your words stand up fine on their own. Have a good day, Costa. CD

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Unique, thought provoking poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


You carry us from the skies, then into the center of the earth and back out again in an incredible poetic journey. Yes, it could have been longer, but it still stands pretty strong how it is. The only thing that I might suggest is that you lose the black and red that surround the poem which to my eye takes away from it. Your words stand up fine on their own. Have a good day, Costa. CD

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Actually we all must think about it.
Today in this technical life it is more important to care.


Posted 2 Years Ago


costa siwale

2 Years Ago

Saddam always good to get a review from you.
Indeed we need to think about it. Thank you fri.. read more
That's something to think about and actually feel :)
Worth the thought!




Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

costa siwale

2 Years Ago

Well thank you, for taking the time to read. much appreciated
COSTA WHAT YOU WANT TO CONVEY IS NOT VISIBLE IN THE POEM . ITS LOST SOMEWHERE IN YOUR WAYS TO BRING OUT HEAVY WORDS .

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

costa siwale

2 Years Ago

Thank you for the observation, its quiet true, should have made it a little longer. thanks
Raghib

2 Years Ago

a pleasure

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costa siwale
costa siwale

Lusaka , southern region, Zambia



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