Foreword and Warning

Foreword and Warning

A Chapter by M.R Steiner

foreword and a warning.



Hello test subject, are you ready for an experiment?

I've been told to keep this short.

What is Totenstein?

Totenstein is a direct synergy inspired by the works of Mary Shelley and H.P Lovecraft. It’s most notable influences are Frankenstein (Mary Shelley’s best work) and Herbert West"Reanimator (Lovecraft’s worst) both are centred in a modern Hammer Horror style world with Jamesian plot devices (I LOVE hammer horror)

Totenstein is told through diary entries, emails, news articles, police reports and many other mediums.

Also some douchebag tried to steal this exact starting plot and tried to pass it off as his own without even changing the title a while ago. Little did he know I tried to shop this around over 3 years prior to the incident, this has left me understandably paranoid about putting my work online but I need feedback to improve this completely rewritten version. 

That and I think the people on here are a lot nicer than the ones on Fictiondepression

Note* thank you for my friends who messaged me suggestions so far, I've been busy putting these to work, but now you have me performing a basic redraft so now I need more input from folks :)  


© 2016 M.R Steiner

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very good I will be reading more of this along the way man

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Added on August 31, 2016
Last Updated on September 7, 2016
Tags: lovecraft, mary shelley, occult, science fiction, dark, lord byron, mythos, horror, addiction, pain, relapse


M.R Steiner
M.R Steiner

a terrible city, an even more terrible region, United Kingdom

looking for advice and feedback, every critic welcome no matter what, I will thank you :) more..