The Eyes of March (past tense, third person)

The Eyes of March (past tense, third person)

A Book by M.R Steiner
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800 years into the future, Humanity is but a memory, only a single girl lives among the wreckage, or so she thought.

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© 2016 M.R Steiner


Author's Note

M.R Steiner
I always review back! and pride myself on giving real honest feedback about my reading experience :)

I'm trying to improve my own writing, this is another experiment into altering a book I finished a while ago. it was in a different tense and I'm still learning so it's not perfect but I really want your help, be brutal. even if you hate it, please say why? :) thank you

cheers for the honest suggestions from last time for those who reviewed, your awesome, lets keep the ball rolling,

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Added on October 5, 2016
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Tags: cyberpunk, augmented reality, tragedy, dark, life, sad, adventure, pain, story, teen, evil, genocide, fascism, future, dystopia, end of the world, animals, hybrids, singularity

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M.R Steiner
M.R Steiner

a terrible city, an even more terrible region, United Kingdom



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looking for advice and feedback, every critic welcome no matter what, I will thank you :) more..

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