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Pain

Pain

A Poem by Shannon Math

"I Don't Love You Anymore."

I'm numb.
No feelings are coming through.
I don't even feel the tears fall down my face.
He walks away...
No words of sympathy or remorse.
Is it even possible for WORDS to hurt?

That night..
As I lay thinking..
"Did I do something wrong?"
Worst of all...
"WAS THERE SOMEONE ELSE?"

In my dreams,
The words just keep popping up.
My chests constricts painfully,
As the words fully sink in.
More tears fall without my knowing.

I wonder...
"Why call it heartbreak when everything hurts?"

The most painful words :

"I DON"T LOVE YOU ANYMORE."

© 2011 Shannon Math


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No matter who says that it always hurts. They are saying that they don't like you and as human there's nothing worse.
Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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ZeN
I can relate.. good strong emotions.. dont let the world get you down, there will be better days.

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is very strong in the emotions it conveys. and i liked the way you put it some dialoge as well. very nice :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Some words can burn the heart forever. You have create a sad and beautiful poem of love sadness and disappointments. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on April 15, 2011
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Shannon Math
Shannon Math

Philadelphia, PA



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