Smack !

Smack !

A Poem by lee von cleef
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Arizona Nights are Dark

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Smack! Harley hog flipped  
Over the late night Javelina  
Joshua trees corral his headlight
And the prickly pears prick  
Saguaro silhouette through  
Starlet dust
Western winds wake up red skies
Sandy dry tongue cracked lips  
It’s all over now goodbye Harley

Feel  my  Love

LVC

© 2012 lee von cleef


Author's Note

lee von cleef
To desert is not as empty as it should be. Feel.

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Well done.... clapping going in the background. This is the desert depicted so well... all of its beauty, so often missed for first appearance being "bleak" and "so tan". The bike. Ouch! OUCH! O U C H !!! But what a beautiful place for that beast to go.....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lee von cleef

8 Years Ago

Your quick on the draw !thank you.
Shelley Holt-Lowrey

8 Years Ago

It showed up on my feed, and I apparently clicked on it and fell onto your page... which for me is f.. read more



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the desert is not like before, its completely change now i guess. I like this poem, its hopeful. Nice!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lee von cleef

7 Years Ago

Hard to see dam hogs running in the night
heh, yes the desert is a hard place. Joshua trees can bleed you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A man's love for his mode of transport, usually a source of ridicule and comedy, here is given its rightful due. Nature seems to mourn the Harley's passing with a vivid expressionistic touch. I love the line 'Starlet dust' bursts through.

Posted 7 Years Ago


indeed a feel....pleasured by the fine imagery conjoured through your clever writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lee von cleef

8 Years Ago

I have left the open west but my mind drifts that way.
Well done.... clapping going in the background. This is the desert depicted so well... all of its beauty, so often missed for first appearance being "bleak" and "so tan". The bike. Ouch! OUCH! O U C H !!! But what a beautiful place for that beast to go.....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lee von cleef

8 Years Ago

Your quick on the draw !thank you.
Shelley Holt-Lowrey

8 Years Ago

It showed up on my feed, and I apparently clicked on it and fell onto your page... which for me is f.. read more

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Added on September 5, 2012
Last Updated on September 27, 2012
Tags: Motorcycle

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lee von cleef
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