My Art and I

In a way,

My art and I are the same

Everyday we sit there waiting,

Waiting for someone to look at us

Admire us.

Tell us we are good

Tell us that we are not a failed attemt

We both hide behind covers

And once you open us, everything spills out

We are both tightly bound

And we both take time to interprate

That's why I like you art,

You are so unique

You are the only one who truly understands

Reviews

[Luna Northstar]

I like this poem, because is filled with truth and emotion. I also really like the word choice, one of my favorite lines are actually:

"And once you open us, everything spills out"

I like it because it creates a nice visual; going perfectly with the theme. I also like the comparisons you make, 'we are both tightly bound', 'And we both take time to interprate'.

The last line is wonderful too, because it delivers the full impact of the poem.

One ironic thing about art and you is the spectators OF the art. Some people look upon art and see nothing, while others see the world. They see nothing but beauty and extravagance. Yet, they admire silently, with silent praise. But, it's always nice to hear it once in a while; isn't it? Just to let you know, I do admire you. You are definitely not a failed attempt, and most of all, You. Are. Good. No, your amazing. :)


Great poem, 100/100