All This Pain and Misery

All This Pain and Misery

A Poem by Craizze
"

recent break up of two years...

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all this pain and misery

makes me want to sleep forever

bleeding inside, bleeding outside

can't shake this deep obsession

why i love him i know not

if he really loved me he'd let me sleep forever

 

so tired and wide awake

fears of painful memories dancing in my eyes

yet no one sees or no one cares

why should i

 

all this pain and misery

can't bare my naked self

all these scars i hold so dear

watch me as i sleep

 

eighteen and nowhere to fly

smiling at will and pleasing as always

no one can save me

from all this pain and misery

© 2010 Craizze


Author's Note

Craizze
feel free to comment or add me:) and yes i know it's all over the place.. i was inspired by deep emotion and decided to keep it raw.

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wow you are super hella talented i love your poetry it has sooo much emotion to it


Posted 12 Years Ago


It's good! You did a good job in making the reader feel the emotions that are shown through your writing:) thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Craizze
Craizze

new brunswick, Canada



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hii everyone. Im 19 years old and I've been writing my whole life. Nothing published, have no connections, but I show my close friends and sometimes family members. It's a passion of mine and I am pro.. more..

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