Please, Baby, Please

Please, Baby, Please

A Poem by Craizze
"

poem about my boyfriend

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please come see me now

 

to hold you in my arms

to remember you are not imaginary

 

to kiss your lips

to remember their sweet taste

 

to have you close to me

to feel your beating heart

 

please come see me now

I'm starting to forget

 

your image is fading in my mind

and my heart

 

please come see me now

to remember you are not imaginary

© 2010 Craizze


Author's Note

Craizze
I havnt seen my boyfriend in weeks yet he lives a 7 minutes drive in his car to my house. He says not to call because his parents dont like people calling. More like their annoyed at my desperate calls becasue he has barely twice called in a month and a half call me because he is too busy or not near a phone.

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Love as we know it, is not always how we wish it to be, at times. He may not feel the same as you do, he may not want to call, and that means it is time for you to move on, it isn't something we can always control, when it comes to another persons feelings.
Your words of desperation are well expressed in this piece. I hope you don't get disappointed.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Love as we know it, is not always how we wish it to be, at times. He may not feel the same as you do, he may not want to call, and that means it is time for you to move on, it isn't something we can always control, when it comes to another persons feelings.
Your words of desperation are well expressed in this piece. I hope you don't get disappointed.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Craizze
Craizze

new brunswick, Canada



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hii everyone. Im 19 years old and I've been writing my whole life. Nothing published, have no connections, but I show my close friends and sometimes family members. It's a passion of mine and I am pro.. more..

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